高考在即，英语作文差生急求帮助.

-“you can not only communicate with each other,”改为“Not only can you communicate with each other”

-"we have teachers making comments online"有点chinese English。可以用There be 的句型“there are many teachers can help you online”

还有一些关于写作文的材料给你参考~
开首句型
1) Have you ever gone***? Have you ever been to***? If you have no experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.
2) Are you***? Are you***? We are, usually.
3) In large part as a consequence of***, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.
4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of***
5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in***but also in***/during***/when***)
6) What A to B, that C to D
表示原因的常用句型
1 There are three reasons for this.
2 The reasons for this are as follows.
3 The reason for this is obvious.
4 The reason for this is not far to seek.
5 The reason for this is that...
6 We have good reason to believe that...
表示好处的常用句型
1 It has the following advantages.
2 It does us a lot of good.
3 It benefits us quite a lot.
4 It is beneficial to us.
5 It is of great benefit to us
表示坏处的常用句型
1 It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2 It does us much harm.
3 It is harmful to us.
表示措施的常用句型
1 We should take some effective measures.
2 We should try our best to overcome （conquer ）the difficulties.
3 We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4 We should solve the problems that we are confronted （faced） with.
表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult， convenient）possible for sb. to do sth.
2 We think it necessary to do sth.
3 It plays an important role in our life.
表示变化的常用句型
1 Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2 A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications.
3 The computer has brought about many changes in education.
表示比较的常用句型
1）Compared with A，B...
2) A and B has several points in common.
3) It is true that A ... , but the chief fault B (obvious defects )are ...
4) A and B differ in several ways.
5) The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
6） I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
7） There is a striking contrast between them
表示事实、现状的常用句型
1 We cannot ignore the fact that...
2 No one can deny the fact that...
3 There is no denying the fact that...
4 This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
5 However，that’s not the case.
表示例举的常用句型
1) A good case in point is ...
2) As an illustration, we may take ...
3) Such examples might be given easily.
4) ...is often cited as an example.
表示数量的常用句型
1 It has increased（decreased）from...to...
2 The population in this city has now increased (decreased)to 800,000.
3 The output of July in this factory increased by 15% compared with that of January.
表示看法的常用句型
1 People have(take, adopt, assume, )different attitudes towards sth.
2 People have different opinions on this problem.
3 People take different views of(on)the question.
4 Some people believe that...Others argue that...
表示结论的常用句型
1 In short, it can be said that ...
2 It may be briefly summed up as follows.
3 From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that ...
部分常用套语
1 It’s well known to us that ...
2 As is known to us...
3 This is a topic that is being widely talked about.
4 From the graph(table, chart)listed above, it can be seen that ...
5 As a proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.
表观点的句型
1.In my opinion, we should believe him this time.
依我看，这次我们应该相信他。
2. In my view, he will surely forgive you if you apologize.
我觉得,如果你道歉的话，他肯定会原谅你的。
3. I suppose (that) the book will be helpful to you.
我觉得这本书对你会有帮助。
4. I maintain that nothing can take the place of hard work.
我认为,没有什么能取代努力。
5. As far as I'm concerned, everyone should be given an equal opportunity.
在我看来，每个人都应该有公平的机会。
6. As I see it, this is of great importance.
依我看来，这非常重要。
7. From where I stand, what he just said was somewhat reasonable.
从我的立场来看，他刚才说的话有些道理。
8. It seems to me that he doesn't know what he is doing.
我觉得他好象不知道自己在干什么。
9. From my point of view, health is the most valuable wealth.
在我看来，健康是最宝贵的财富。
10.It's my feeling that attitude is more important than ability.
我觉得态度比能力更重要。

下面是我们中学阶段已学过的表达不同功能的常见的主要高级句式例举：
1、祈使句 / 名词词组 + and / or +陈述句（祈使句 / 名词词组表示“条件”）
Work hard, and you’ll succeed. Hurry up, or you’ll be late.
A little more efforts, and you will make it.
2、it作形式主语的句型
It is well-known that China is a developing country
It is no use talking to him again.
3、it作形式宾语的句型
We feel it exciting to work with you.
I owe it to him that I’ve achieved so much.
4、It is / was + 被强调部分 + that / who…表示“强调”
It is they that/who have gone to the Great Wall.
It was not until he took off his sunglasses that I recognized him.
5、to… / in order to…/ so as to…/ so that…/ in order that…表示“目的”
Check your composition to/ so as to/in order to avoid mistakes.
He worked hard in order that they can serve his country well.
6、There be 句型及其扩展形式表示“存在”
There lived an old man in that village.
There stands a tower on the top of the mountain.
7、分词短语作状语
Hearing the news, he burst into tears.
When asked where he came from, he didn’t reply.
8、With 结构作状语或定语
He likes to sleep with the door open/closed.
She came in, with tears in her eyes/tears in eyes.
After a few minutes, a woman with a baby in her arms got on the bus.
9、who / whom / whose / which / that / when / where / why / as引导定语从句
He won the first place in the competition, which made him happy.
I, who am your friend, will help you.
As is known to us all, he is the best student in his class.
10、what / that / whether / when / where / who / why等引导的名词性从句
What we need is more time.
That he couldn’t come made us unhappy.
Who will go makes no difference.

1.并列关系
for one thing …,for another…;（一则/首先……,二则/其次……）;firstly…,secondly…,thirdly…(第一……,第二……,第三……);first…,second…,third…,at last首先……,其次……,再次……,最后……）
2.时间顺序关系
before, after, then, afterwards（后来),at last, in the end, finally， next, in the meantime(同时)/ at the same time
3.因果关系
therefore(因此),so, thus（因此),as a result(结果)
4.转折关系
but, yet/and yet (但是), however, nevertheless(然而,不过)
5一般到个别关系
for example, for instance(例如) such as+ 名词/短语（例如）
6.递进关系
besides(此外), what’s more(而且), and, what is/ was worse/ to make things worse(更糟糕的是) also, in fact =as a matter of fact
7概括关系
in short(总之),in a word（简而言之),all in all(总的来说,总而言之)
8.推断关系
or else(否则),otherwise(否则)=or, in that case(如果那样的话)
9.等同关系
namely(既,也就是),in other words, that is,=that is to say（也就是说）,I mean(我是说)
10比较对比关系.
on the contrary（相反）,instead of, on one hand…, on the other hand…（一方面…,另一方面）
11.转换关系
by the way
12.让步关系
in any case（不管怎样，无论如何）,after all（毕竟）,,anyhow（不管怎样）,in spite of(尽管)

一． 总结句型
1) in general/above all/with the result that/as a result/consequently,
2) As far as I am concerned/as for me,
3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.
4) Whether we examine the ***above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.
5) In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.
6) I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ***but also to be*** ，both in ***and in***.
7) There is no doubt that***

二． 开首句型
1) Have you ever gone***? Have you ever been to***? If you have no experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.
2) Are you***? Are you***? We are, usually.
3) In large part as a consequence of***, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.
4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of***
5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in***but also in***/during***/when***)
6) What A to B, that C to D
三． 并列句型
1) Some people like A due to***. However, there are many young people, including me, especially like B.
2) There might be two reasons, I think***, for the change.
3) A and B are both important, they are attribute which are equally necessary for a person to achieve success in his life.
四． 转折句型
1)***Such defects as mentioned above can be prevented by the other way of ***
2) Except for ***’s sake only.
3) Perhaps A is the wrong word, however, B might be better.
4) First***last but not least***
5) Shall we do this? Not necessary the case.
6) ***, and vice versa indeed .
7) On the contrary, in spite of these increase***
五． 名理句型
1) It is usually the case that ***
2) It is plain common sense---the more/less***the more/less***
3) The serious reality had taught us a lesson: not being environment friendly will be avenged mercilessly.
4) As a proverb says/as is known to all/as a popular saying goes, ***
5) I can think of no better illustration than an English poem/adage which goes like this:***
6) The old story of***can serve as a good illustration that***
六． 强调句型
1) With/due to/spurred by***we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with, that is, ***
2) The reason why***is no other than***as I know.
3) The same thing is true with***
七． 图表句型
1) From the figures/statistics given in the table it can be seen/noticed that***
2) From the graph/table/diagram/chart above, we can see that***obviously.
3) As show in the chart/by the graph***
4) Have you ever anticipated the prospects of***in the coming decades? Let us just take a look at the figures of***as shown in the graph above.
5) The gap between***and***will be further widened.
6) In face of increasingly serious shortage of energy, we should take effective measures/which of the measures we should take?

你可以背一些新东方作文的模版，比如开头和结尾的好句子，最好有些倒装句，保证没问题，一个类型的文章就背一种，我当时就是这样做的，分数还行

1, your beginning is short enough ,but not specific and not readable,or we may say ,not attractive!
2, the main idea is so short ,also need to add somethig to be reasonable.
3, the ending is a little long ,comparing with your main idea ,so ,cut something.
ps: your main point is proper~

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