帮我翻译下一个面试自我介绍!~谢谢

Ladies and Gentlemen
Good morning. Itps my honor to receive your interview invitation. I hope I can show a true self to all of you and also leave you a deep impression. My name is Lin Chaoqun. I'm 22 years old, with business English as my major. My hobby involves reading and surfing the Internet. Since my character is open and easy-going, I can well handle the relationship with the people around me, and get well with all my friends and relatives. Besides, I am full of confidence to my future life.
During my college years, I gained much social experience during the vocations. I had worked as an in-shop salesgirl in Yonghui supermarket chainshop, which not only made me accumulate the precious sales experience but also inspired my enthusiam on promotion. I attach great importance to the dicipline, so for the task delegated by the superior, I will exert all my effort to finish it, since I believe that only a perfect dicipline system can ensure the smooth and sustainable development of a company.

看来坛子里同行不少。

不知道你这个是写的还是要说出来的。从中文来看是要发言用的吧。以我外企HR经验来看，

口头的首先最好自己写，因为自己写的东西才能记得清楚；别人的可以参考，但最好用比较

简单的词汇和句型而且一定所有的词汇要是你自己能真正掌握的；第三就是自己一定要练习

，对着镜子说，要熟练，才不至于面试时卡壳；第四，在很熟练的基础上，面试时不要说的

太快，要清晰，尤其对于口语不是很强的。图快往往就不清晰。

Good morning everybody. It's a great honor for me to be invited to this interview

and have this presentation here.
（希望。。。希望。。。 放到后面去讲，先将讲主要的）

Let me introduce myself first. My name is Lin Chao Qun and you can call me Kelly*

if you like. ** I'm 22 years old and just graduated from XX University (and a

student of XX University, 如果还没毕业）. I majoyed in Business English and I am

good at my courses at school. (要自信） Talking about the personalities, I am an

out-going person, friendly and confident. I have good people skills and strong

attention to details*** ，so that's why I can get along with people aroud me very

well, and I am so initiative in my work.**** I am such a confident person that I

take everything optimistically in my life.

*如果听众是鬼老，最好取个英文名，让他容易记住你, 名字你自己取就是了。
**22岁，民族汉，这个对你的工作没什么影响吧？不用说了。如果一定要说，说下年龄就足

够了。
***good people skills, a strong attention to details 这都是吹嘘自己时绝对不能少的

词。
**** initialtive 是个很好的用法，说明你做事自觉。前面说你的交际能力和注重细节，这

两句就是具体例子。

When I was in the university, I tried to use every school vocation to get some

work experience. I worked in YongHui supermarked for 3 months as a store-

assistant*. Because of my enthusiasm, good working ethic and sound communication

skills, I did my job very well during that time. My performance was highly

appraised by my manager and colleagues . I also gained a lot experience in sales

and customer service**.

* store-assistant是正确的职位表示。
** 鬼老都很重视客服经验

这里要把过去的经验稍微说详细点。尤其是my enthusiasm, good working ethic and sound

communication skills这些词，说的时候要慢，清晰，着重。这是体现你特点的话

(稍停顿一下）All right, I can say that I am such a person who can do job well

without any supervision. I am confident that if I would get the chance working

for XX company, I will definately be valuable to the company.

这里要说得很自信。流利的说完这些，就离胜利不远了。

(轻松的）That's all about me. I hope that I showed you all my characters you are
looking for. And... remember my name (这里要显得幽默一点，如果一定要这么说的话。我建议：And... be impressed by my presentation.) Thank you very much.

去之前一定要背熟练。

Ladies and Gentlemen
Good morning. Itps my honor to receive your interview invitation. I hope I can show a true self to all of you and also leave you a deep impression. My name is Lin Chaoqun. I'm 22 years old, with business English as my major. My hobby involves reading and surfing the Internet. Since my character is open and easy-going, I can well handle the relationship with the people around me, and get well with all my friends and relatives. Besides, I am full of confidence to my future life.
During my college years, I gained much social experience during the vocations. I had worked as an in-shop salesgirl in Yonghui supermarket chainshop, which not only made me accumulate the precious sales experience but also inspired my enthusiam on promotion. I attach great importance to the dicipline, so for the task delegated by the superior, I will exert all my effort to finish it, since I believe that only a perfect dicipline system can ensure the smooth and sustainable development of a company.
有几个别的信息点因为照顾英语表达习惯而省略掉，比如“汉族”，这在英语的自我介绍中基本上属于无意义信息，故省略。
专业翻译，品质保证。今天闲来无事，翻译下自己介绍练练手，请同行指正。

Goodmorning. The interview can be received your invitation to you here, in the learning and consult I feel very honored. Hope that through this interview can show you yourself, hope you remember me. My name is Lin, 22. Han, business English college. I like reading and
All the examiner:
Internet browsing information. My personality is bright, easy. Can anything around the relationship, and relatives and friends to get along well, and full of confidence.
At school, I don't forget years to his vacation exercise social experience in yonghui, supermarket chain done a three-month resident promoters. This not only for my accumulated valuable experience in sales, but also inspired me to sales work enthusiasm. I am a girl of discipline, the supervisor for the job, and I will give complete real earnest, perfecting rules and regulations of the company is a guarantee of steady development