2021年7月1日雅思写作考试真题与范文

　　很多考生都被雅思写作这部分考试给难住了，对于马上就要参加雅思考试的同学来说，如果还没有完全准备充分的话，可以来看一下7月1日雅思写作考试真题与范文。

　　 2021年7月1日雅思写作考试真题

　　小作文：欧洲各年龄段牛奶和黄油的摄入量

　　大作文：同意与否

　　Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since computer technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

　 　大作文写作范文

　　For centuries libraries are in the service of man； these libraries are the repositories of never-ending knowledge known as books. Some people opine that we can do away with traditional libraries because technology has given us the facility of virtual or online libraries. I， however， believe that even though technology has reduced our need to go to the libraries， our traditional libraries can never become redundant.

　　With the advent of new technologies in the field of computers and telecommunications， revolutionary changes have taken place in the feld of Library and Information Science. The shape of traditional libraries containing a large number of printed documents is in the process of being transformed into paper-less libraries containing a large number of digitized documents. The facilities offered by networking have not left libraries untouched. Modern libraries are not only digitized but networked also. This has led to the creation of virtual libraries， i.e.， libraries without walls through which the user has access to information at any time， anywhere in the world， by using the modern tools of communications， such as computers and Internet facilities.

　　However， one should keep in mind that a person goes to a library to search and get information from books and sit and study there. The library＇s ambiance and peaceful and scholarly atmosphere help one concentrate more on one＇s work and study. Thus， libraries will never become redundant. They will always be there to indicate the presence of a well-read and educated society.

　　Another important point is that it is very difficult to always read books from the computer monitor. Traditional books can be issued from the library and read in the comfort of your bed. Virtual libraries can be accessed only by those who are computer literate. Access to virtual libraries can be affected by power cuts and network failures. Moreover， in a traditional library， you are guided by the librarians if you need any help in searching for the book.

　　To put it in a nutshell， I pen down saying that advancement should be welcomed in every field， but the importance of the libraries for their fundamental role cannot be put aside. This tendency will add more crowns of success to the importance of libraries.

　 　雅思写作细节须知

　　标点书写问题

　　按英文书写规定，标点应紧挨着它的附着意群进行标注，与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。但是在实际作文中经常发现学生不论什么标点都会当作一个单词来对待，即标点前后都空下空格，结果给人以标点满天飞的感觉，影响了文章的美感。

　　书写过于随意

　　每个人都有自己的书写习惯，但是雅思考试毕竟是要给外国人看的，所以大家如果能够在书写习惯上贴近老外，肯定会给人以亲切的卷面印象。比如不要书写得过于密集，以免让人看不清单词，影响理解。也不要写得过于稀疏而让人无法在eye span 范围内看到完整的意群，从而影响考官阅读。字不要写得太大，也不要太小。尽量不要连写以免造成l，r，n，m等混淆不清，造成考官阅卷障碍。

　　写作格式混乱

　　英文写作格式主要有齐头式和缩进式。通常齐头式因为顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行，所以会给人以整洁的感觉，也比较推荐大家使用这种格式。缩进式和中文的写作格式相似，即每一段的开头句缩进，但是段落之间没有空行，所以不是很受欢迎。经常在作文中看到同学们用的是“齐头式+缩进式”，即段首句缩进+段落之间空行，给人以不伦不类的感觉，同学们一定要注意。

　　总结段缺失

　　很多学生在写作时因为时间不充裕无法写出总结段，于是给阅卷者没完成任务的感觉。建议考生尽量要写最后的summary，无论是task1还是task2。因为同学们可以利用最后一段来点题、归纳，这样可以最大限度地避免因为语言功底不深而导致的文章结构不明晰，说服力不强等问题，即用形式来弥补内容上无法克服的困难。

　　分段过多或者过少

　　大家可以设想一下，当你拿着一篇只有一段的很长的文章时，是不是会有很晕的感觉？尤其是当我们的写作能力有限，文字表达没有吸引力时，怎么能让考官有耐心看完你的文章呢？再设想一下，当你看的文章分成很多的段落，而你的论证能力有限，费了半天劲也写不出几个句子，会不会每段都给人以流水账的感觉呢？

　　 如何提升雅思写作内容

　　你读过多少范文

　　雅思写作内容提升第一问：你读过多少范文？有的同学可能从开始备考雅思写作一直到考试都没完整地看过一篇范文，有的同学可能了解范文的重要性，不但看范文还将范文背诵下来。这其实是利用范文提升雅思写作的两个极端，不看范文当然不可以，但背诵范文其实也没有必要，所以学习范文的时候强调一个“读”字。

　　你背过多少词汇和句式

　　雅思写作内容提升第二问：你背过多少词汇和句式？缺乏积累也是影响写作内容的提升。如果我们在写雅思作文的时候经常发现所写内容不能完美表述自己想表达的意思，或者脑中已经想好内容，提笔却没有词汇句式可用，那就说明大家在写作方面的原始积累还不够，建议大家先去背一些雅思写作的高频词汇、短语和句式，等到有了一定的原始积累以后再去写作就会感觉顺手许多。 你是否还在随心所欲地写作

　　雅思写作内容提升第三问：你是否还在随心所欲地写作？写作过程中要按照雅思写作要求，回应题目，减少语法错误，保证内容充实语句段落连贯，还要注意写作字数达标。