一篇英语改错！

Last Sunday my car broke up on my way back.What（ up--down） was worse,it was rainning heavy and there was no one（heavy--heavily ） whom I could turn.I decided to walk around before accepting（turn--turn to ） I'd have to spend the day in the car.Luckily,I didn't walk（ 正确） far before I found out a small house beside a river with a（ 去除out） light shone from the siting room. i knocked at the door and（shone-shining ）listen to my story carefully。greatly to my loy，not only did she promise to put me up for the night，and she asked his son to repair my car。how fortunate i felt to meet such a kind person！

1. Last Sunday my car broke down* on my way back.What

2. was worse,it was rainning heavily* and there was no one

3. whom I could turn to*. I decided to walk around before accepting

4. I'd have to spend the day in the car. Luckily,I didn't walk
5. far before I found out a small house beside a river with *

6. light shone from the siting room. i knocked at the door and(后面不知道是不是错了 没有括号 链接也不对)
7. listened* to my story carefully

8. greatly to my loy，not only did she promise to put me up for the night，but* she asked his son to repair my car。how fortunate i felt to meet such a kind person！

第一句 up改成down 第二句 heavy 改成heavily 第三句turn后面加上to
I'd have to spend the day in the car.Luckily,I didn't walk 这句话应该缺转折连词，我感觉应该加上个or

第五句 把out去掉
第六句 shone改成shining 第七句是不是缺东西？listen改成listened 最后一句 greatly 改成great
his son 改成her son，fortunate改成fortunately
望采纳~