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I found a homeless dog on street today,it seemd so hungry,and it was very dirty.I felt pity for it and fed cakes to it.when i came back,the dog followed me.So i decided to adopt it and let it become a member of our family.
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Today I found a homeless dog on the street,the dog looked hungry,and it was very dirty.I showed mercy on it ,and gave it some bread.When I walked to my home ,the dog followed me.So I made up my mind to raise it,and let it become a member of our family.
Today I found a homeless dog in the stress.It seemed to be hungry and it was very dirty.I thought it was very poor.When I went away,it followed me!So I wanted to keep it, it will be a member of my family!
Today I found a homeless dog on the street,the dog seemed to be hungry and was very dirty.I sympathized with it and gave it some bread.When I walked back,the dog followed me.So I decided to adopt it and let it become a member of my family.