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My name is Zhou Shuyao.I'm a junior student from Yifu school,junior one,class five.I'm twelve years old.I like listening to music and reading novels.I hope that I can make more friends and play with everyone.I wish I can have common topics with you and talk with everyone without difficulties .Thank you!

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My name is Zhou Shuyao.I am 12 years old. I am a student in Class5 Grade7 in Yi Fu Middle school.I am a sunny girl! I like listening to music and reading fiction. Do you like it? I like makes friends.I want to make more friends,play with friends,I hope my friends and I have a common language.Do you want to be my friend?

Hello,everybody.My name is zhoushuyao,I'm in Class yifuzhongxue Grade senve of five school,I like to listen to music and read a novel,I like English very much,I hope to make more
friends, and all of a play, there is a common language.I hope that every of you will love me,Thank
you.

　　Hello, everyone. I am Zhou Shuyao. Thisyear I am twelve years old. I am a student from Yifu Middle School.I like listening to music and reading novels. I would like to play with you andwe can learn together and help from each other. I hope to make more friends. Thanks!
　　

Hello everyone,my name is zhoushuyao.I am a student of YIFU high school.I am in Class Five,Grade One.I like listening to music and reading novels.I hope to make more friends and play with each other.Thank you!