求英语高手帮忙，以 English Corner(英语角)为题写一篇英语劝告文小作文，展开想象力的翅膀吧！

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Dear Li Hua,
I would like to tell you some advantages about the English Corner.First of all,if you took a part in the English Corner,you would develope your confidence of English and help you getting rid of being shy.In addition,there are many students who learns English well in the English Corner,if you can join them,you will have chance to learn some useful skills from them,also,you can practise English with them.Then,you can find your problems in English by speaking English and you can ask friends or teachers to help you very soon.Therefore,I suggest you try to take a part in the English Corner.
Your 。。。