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Cat is a very cute animal. It has a round nose and two round eyes. It has two black ears. It is very beautiful. I love it very much. Sometime,it plays with itself. But most of the time,it plays with me at home. It loves eating fish very much. It loves sleeping very much, too. It likes sleeping on a box or sleeping on the floor. My friends and family love it and regard it as a friend.

虽然有些地方不太确定，但还是帮你把一些明显的错误改了过来，你要多注意一般现在时里，第三人称单数后面的动词是要变形的，还有like和love后面加doing动名词，还有单复数的问题也要多注意一下，，，，我也是个学生，所以可能还有一些地方稍欠妥当，不过，希望可以帮到你！

My cat is very cute. (看后文的意思不是泛指猫，而是指你家的猫) It has round nose and eyes.(楼上两位的改正并不需要，只是强调形状的话不用特意加上数量)It has black ears（第三人称）. It is very beautiful(助词). I love it very much. It loves sleeping very much（前面说的是你爱猫，这句换猫为主语了，所以句尾不能用too）. It likes sleeping on a box or on the floor(第三人称). It is my friend and family. It's friendly and I love it.(信息量太大拆成两句，猫是单数)

Butin most of thetime应该为but in most time。
itfollowed metake a walk at home应该为it always follow me at home。
love，like记得变三单形式。family 改为families。

自己对吧，错误很多：Cat is a very cute animal. It has a around nose and two round eyes. It has two black ears. It is very beautiful. I love it very much. Sometimes,it plays by itself. But in most time, it follows me to take a walk at home. It loves to eat fish very much. It loves to sleep very much ,too. It likes to sleep on a box or sleeps on the floor. My friends and my family are love it.

第三句 It has two black ears 四 It is very beautiful sometimes 末句