before and now 的作文六年级

I'm **,a student of No.1 Middle School. I have a gooa friend,Jim.He' an USA girl.We are both in Class Two,Grade Eight.She is 15 years old,one year older than me. We both study hard.I'm good at physices,but she's good at math.We often help each other with lessons.Both of us like helping others. We both like sports very much.Jim enjoy playing basketball.but Ilike palying soccer. She likes green but Ilike red. Tough we are different in my ways,we are good friends

Eight years ago，My hair was short. I didn't like apple and vegetables before. And I couldn't play basketball well.
But，now enytings are different. Now，My hair is very long. I like to eat apple and vegetables. That are very healthy.Besides，I like play basketball very much now.
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Hello, I'm mo mo, mo mo. I'm a student. I have a faster here and schooled some place at all. But see, i've lost, got it