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The article illustrates the design features of the Dali Branch of Guangdong Calligraphy Academy by various points of location, function, fire-Protection, construction and appearances, and the main points were expressed by combining the function, appearance with design intention of the Academy. After analyzing the factors of location, culture background and so on, the relations between the appearance and intention were especially expressed integrating the facts, and also expressed the importance of the function and appearance, even the lines structure. The standpoint of the design was stated finally as graduate, in corresponding with my own thought about the construction.

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The artical adresses the design characteristics of Dali branch of Guangdong Academy of calligraphy form the aspects of location, function, transportation, fire protection,structure and ths shape, and expresses the point by combinating the fuction,shape and the academy of calligraphy together.After analysising the elements such as the location and cultural backgrounds of the academy, the thesis stresses the important relationship between the academy's shape and its function,as well as their improtaces and the construction of lines.Finally, the author gives out his/her own opinion about the design and relevant thoughts about the building itself

“This article has discussed the designing characteristics of Dali Branch of Guangdong Calligraphy Institute mainly through the location, function, transportation, fire control, structure and configuration with key point expressed by the combination of the main themes of function, configuration and Calligraphy Institute. After analysing the elements of location and cultural background of the institute, the relations between its configuration and theme has been discussed with the combination of practical key points, and thus the significance of functions and configurations, as well as the constitute of line have been relatively expounded. At last, the personal view about this design as a graduate is given and some thoughts of architecture itself is elaborated correspondingly."

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"Article mainly through the location, function, traffic, fire control, structure, shape and so on several aspects discusses the guangdong calligraphy school big drain design features of branch, and through the function, appearance and calligraphy academy this design theme to express emphasis. Based on the analysis of the location of the court, and the elements such as cultural background, combined with the actual focus this paper discusses the relationship between calligraphy court appearance and themes, and should want to discusses the function and the importance of appearance, as well as the line structure. Finally as graduates own viewpoint on the design, accordingly, expounded some thoughts on building itself."

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