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First of all, I've been fortunate to receive Zoni Language Center of the admission notice, but also very nervous, after all, everything is ready owed to the east - the only hope to smooth the passage of F1 visa.
I work in travel agencies, engaged in overseas tourism, since joining the WTO, China's tourism industry is also related to the rapid opening to the outside world. Exchanges with the outside of the business has become more closely together, often will inevitably come into contact with the English message. Telephone and related materials, especially outside of the invitations and confirmation are all in English, because my English is limited, often do not know how to listen do not understand and do not talk to the normal situation, which greatly affected the work I do The quality and progress of career advancement opportunities, this is a pity! Therefore, I would like to learn English is really, to improve their standard of spoken language, so I can have a better chance in the future work of the exhibition hands and feet, I believe After further studies in their own work can be very useful. Zoni Language Center which is a specialized language training institutions, so that I can learn the correct English, so that I can more easily and fluent in English and understand that good. Through the local cultural environment and school instructors to teach the correct pronunciation skills, I start with English sounds more fluid. Improve my grammar, reading comprehension, listening, writing and taking notes skills, and let me work in the face of English-speaking peers to be more self-confidence, for me, from my career goal into a step forward.
Second, because China is now the rapid development of tourism economy, especially in the 2008 Olympics and the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai will be the convening of…… China's tourism development of space-growing Furthermore, in the present highly competitive society, There are many travel agents will reuse and enabling a better standard of English talent. And I believe that the United States has the high standard of education system, the United States to study language is absolutely is a clear choice. While studying abroad for the sole purpose is to improve their standard of English, develop knowledge, the development of a better future.
Finally, thank you very much to spend your valuable time I look at the written request, I hope you will agree that studying abroad for giving me this opportunity, I will study well in school. After returning home for my career promotion to another new peak, a better future for themselves on the painting of a gorgeous!

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First of all, I've been fortunate to receive Zoni Language Center of the admission notice, but also very nervous, after all, everything is ready owed to the east - the only hope to smooth the passage of F1 visa.
I work in travel agencies, engaged in overseas tourism, since joining the WTO, China's tourism industry is also related to the rapid opening to the outside world. Exchanges with the outside of the business has become more closely together, often will inevitably come into contact with the English message. Telephone and related materials, especially outside of the invitations and confirmation are all in English, because my English is limited, often do not know how to listen do not understand and do not talk to the normal situation, which greatly affected the work I do The quality and progress of career advancement opportunities, this is a pity! Therefore, I would like to learn English is really, to improve their standard of spoken language, so I can have a better chance in the future work of the exhibition hands and feet, I believe After further studies in their own work can be very useful. Zoni Language Center which is a specialized language training institutions, so that I can learn the correct English, so that I can more easily and fluent in English and understand that good. Through the local cultural environment and school instructors to teach the correct pronunciation skills, I start with English sounds more fluid. Improve my grammar, reading comprehension, listening, writing and taking notes skills, and let me work in the face of English-speaking peers to be more self-confidence, for me, from my career goal into a step forward.
Second, because China is now the rapid development of tourism economy, especially in the 2008 Olympics and the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai will be the convening of…… China's tourism development of space-growing Furthermore, in the present highly competitive society, There are many travel agents will reuse and enabling a better standard of English talent. And I believe that the United States has the high standard of education system, the United States to study language is absolutely is a clear choice. While studying abroad for the sole purpose is to improve their standard of English, develop knowledge, the development of a better future.
Finally, thank you very much to spend your valuable time I look at the written request, I hope you will agree that studying abroad for giving me this opportunity, I will study well in school. After returning home for my career promotion to another new peak, a better future for themselves on the painting of a gorgeous!
就这……

First of all, I've been fortunate to receive Zoni Language Center of the admission notice, but also very nervous, after all, everything is ready owed to the east - the only hope to smooth the passage of F1 visa.
I work in travel agencies, engaged in overseas tourism, since joining the WTO, China's tourism industry is also related to the rapid opening to the outside world. Exchanges with the outside of the business has become more closely together, often will inevitably come into contact with the English message. Telephone and related materials, especially outside of the invitations and confirmation are all in English, because my English is limited, often do not know how to listen do not understand and do not talk to the normal situation, which greatly affected the work I do The quality and progress of career advancement opportunities, this is a pity! Therefore, I would like to learn English is really, to improve their standard of spoken language, so I can have a better chance in the future work of the exhibition hands and feet, I believe After further studies in their own work can be very useful. Zoni Language Center which is a specialized language training institutions, so that I can learn the correct English, so that I can more easily and fluent in English and understand that good. Through the local cultural environment and school instructors to teach the correct pronunciation skills, I start with English sounds more fluid. Improve my grammar, reading comprehension, listening, writing and taking notes skills, and let me work in the face of English-speaking peers to be more self-confidence, for me, from my career goal into a step forward.
Second, because China is now the rapid development of tourism economy, especially in the 2008 Olympics and the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai will be the convening of…… China's tourism development of space-growing Furthermore, in the present highly competitive society, There are many travel agents will reuse and enabling a better standard of English talent. And I believe that the United States has the high standard of education system, the United States to study language is absolutely is a clear choice. While studying abroad for the sole purpose is to improve their standard of English, develop knowledge, the development of a better future.
Finally, thank you very much to spend your valuable time I look at the written request, I hope you will agree that studying abroad for giving me this opportunity, I will study well in school. After returning home for my career promotion to another new peak, a better future for themselves on the painting of a gorgeous!
回答者： DLAMSNB - 见习魔法师 二级 5-5 18:18
First of all, I've been fortunate to receive Zoni Language Center of the admission notice, but also very nervous, after all, everything is ready owed to the east - the only hope to smooth the passage of F1 visa.
I work in travel agencies, engaged in overseas tourism, since joining the WTO, China's tourism industry is also related to the rapid opening to the outside world. Exchanges with the outside of the business has become more closely together, often will inevitably come into contact with the English message. Telephone and related materials, especially outside of the invitations and confirmation are all in English, because my English is limited, often do not know how to listen do not understand and do not talk to the normal situation, which greatly affected the work I do The quality and progress of career advancement opportunities, this is a pity! Therefore, I would like to learn English is really, to improve their standard of spoken language, so I can have a better chance in the future work of the exhibition hands and feet, I believe After further studies in their own work can be very useful. Zoni Language Center which is a specialized language training institutions, so that I can learn the correct English, so that I can more easily and fluent in English and understand that good. Through the local cultural environment and school instructors to teach the correct pronunciation skills, I start with English sounds more fluid. Improve my grammar, reading comprehension, listening, writing and taking notes skills, and let me work in the face of English-speaking peers to be more self-confidence, for me, from my career goal into a step forward.
Second, because China is now the rapid development of tourism economy, especially in the 2008 Olympics and the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai will be the convening of…… China's tourism development of space-growing Furthermore, in the present highly competitive society, There are many travel agents will reuse and enabling a better standard of English talent. And I believe that the United States has the high standard of education system, the United States to study language is absolutely is a clear choice. While studying abroad for the sole purpose is to improve their standard of English, develop knowledge, the development of a better future.
Finally, thank you very much to spend your valuable time I look at the written request, I hope you will agree that studying abroad for giving me this opportunity, I will study well in school. After returning home for my career promotion to another new peak, a better future for themselves on the painting of a gorgeous!
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