帮忙解释几个英语问题，谢谢

1,Enough of it! No one here thinks what you are saying should make any sence.
住口！这里没有人会认为你说的话有道理。

2,They were working in the potato field When the rain poured down.
当大于倾盆的时候，他们正在土豆田地里劳作。

3,One of the advantages of living on the top floor of a highrise building is that you can get a good view.
a highrise building是高层建筑的意思：住在高层建筑顶层的一个好处就是你可以一观全景。

4,Shelly had prepared carefully for the biology examination ,so that she could be sure of passing it at the first attempt.
Shelly已经认真准备了这次生物考试，以便保证一次通过（这次考试）。

5，To send me to a key college is my parents' big commitment.
a key college是名牌大学或者重点大学的意思
把我送到名牌大学（深造）是父母的一大心愿。

6，Don't mention that at the beginning of the story ,or it make give away the shocking ending.
这里的make可能应该是may，怀疑是拼写错误：
不要在故事的开头提及那件事，否则（你将）会泄漏故事的意外结局。

7，York, which I visit last year ,is a nice old city.
在这句话中York是visit的宾语，所以使用which。注意这里应该是visited。

8，有关sometime 和some time区别，我建议你看一下这个帖子：
http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/3923595.html
我在最后也将作以解释。

9，Well, where else could they live in such comfort.
那么，还有什么地方能够让他们生活如此舒服呢？

10，Given time ,he'll make a first-class tennis player.
只要有足够的时间，他将会成为一名一流的网球运动员。这里Given time相当于If he were given time。

下面我解释问题8：
有一本名为《Common Errors in English》的英语参考书对sometime和some time等词汇的用法进行了分析，下面我翻译过来，以期起到抛砖引玉的作用。

当使用sometime这种形式时，意思是指将来比较模糊的、不确定的一段时间，例如Let's get together sometime（将来有时间我们一起聚一聚）.“Some time”用在这种场合下本身没有错，但是相对而言，它是指更为具体的时间，例如Choose some time that fits in your schedule（根据你的安排，找一些时间）. 这句话“some”是用来修饰“time”的。类似地，我们也就知道“someday”和“some day”的用法了。

英语原文：
"Let's get together sometime." When you use the one-word form, it suggests some indefinite time in the future. "Some time" is not wrong in this sort of context, but it is required when being more specific: "Choose some time that fits in your schedule." "Some" is an adjective here modifying "time." The same pattern applies to "someday" (vague) and "some day" (specific).

参考网址：http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/sometime.html
相关链接：http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/errors.html#errors

草这么多
我来搞定
1,Enough of it! No one here thinks what you are saying should make any sence
2,They were working in the potato field When the rain poured down.
3,One of the advantages of living on the top floor of a highrise building is that you can get a good view.
4,Shelly had prepared carefully for the biology examination,So that she could be sure of passing it at the first attempt.
5, To send me to a key college is my parents' big commitment.
6, Don't mention that at the beginning of the story,Or it make give away the shocking ending.
York, Which I visit last year,Is a nice old city.
7, York, Which I visit last year,Is a nice old city.
9, Well, Where else could they live in such comfort.
10, Given time,He'll make a first-class tennis player.

问题还挺多 不过能帮就帮啦
1 够了！这里没有人觉得你说的话有什么道理。
2 下大雨时，他们正在土豆田里劳作。
3 住在高楼顶层的其中一个好处就是你可以有一个好的视角。
4 Shelly已经细心地为生物考试做好了准备，以确保她可以第一次就通过。
5 把我送到一所名牌大学是我父母亲的一大承诺。
6 在故事的开头不要提到那一点，不然结尾就会不够震撼了。
7 （这里不能用WHERE，因为VISIT是及物动词，WHICH是它的宾语。你可说：York, where I worked last year, is a nice old city. 因为WORK是不及物动词）
8 SOMETIME 是一个单词，指以前的adj，或改日，来日adv。some time是一个词组，意为一段时间。
9 他们还有其他什么地方可以住得这么舒服。
10 给他一些时间的话，他可以成为第一流的网球手。

1,Enough of it! No one here thinks what you are saying should make any sence.
够了！这里没人把你的话当回事。
2,They were working in the potato field When the rain poured down.
大雨袭来时，他们正在土豆地里干活。
3,One of the advantages of living on the top floor of a highrise building is that you can get a good view.
住在高层建筑顶楼的好处之一是能让你欣赏到好风景。
4,Shelly had prepared carefully for the biology examination ,so that she could be sure of passing it at the first attempt
雪丽认真准备生物考试，这样她可以保证一次就通过。
5，To send me to a key college is my parents' big commitment.
我父母最大的冀望就是把我送到重点大学念书。
6，Don't mention that at the beginning of the story ,or it make give away the shocking ending.
故事开头别提那个，否则会把震撼的结尾提前泄漏的。
7，York, which I visit last year ,is a nice old city.
我去年游览了约克城，这是个美丽的古城。
which为什么不能用where替代？
这里visit是及物动词，后面直接可跟York。
8，sometime 和some time 有什么区别？
sometime在(将来或过去)某一时候
some time some time
9，Well, where else could they live in such comfort。
好吧，还有哪里能使我们住的这么舒服？
10，Given time ,he'll make a first-class tennis player.
给以时日，他必能成为一流的网球选手。

1.够了，这儿没人觉得你说的话有什么意义．
2．大雨倾盆时他们正在野外拍照片．
3．〔摩天大楼吧！〕highrise大概是高耸入云的意思．
4．shelly为生物考试做了认真的准备，他很有把握能够一次性通过．
5．将我送入目标大学我父母的贡献很大．
不好意思啊，由于时间原因还有一些下次有机会我再试试啊