基本上没什么语法问题,不过觉得有点怪怪的,容我稍稍改些
I am a common person who desires to live uncommon life.I am optimistic and I always keep the words “Tommrow is another day” which said by Scarlett,the heroine of Gone with the Wind in mind. In my spare time, I like reading.Playing pingpong and badminton is my favorite pastime.
Everyone has a star twinkling in his heart,me too.I am eager to fly even without wings and it is so pleasant for me to strive for it. If fortunately I am given this chance for advanced education under your direction,I deem I will do my best.
That is all.Thanks for your time!