用将来时写一篇英语作文 我的寒假 拜托了

In my opinion，my winter holiday will very wonderful because I have a wonderful plane。I will finish my homework first.Then play with my friends.I will get up at senen o’clock in the morning.Do my homework at 8 o‘clock .then play at 9 o’clock.at ten o‘clock ，I will play. the other time ，I will play.So I will very happy.What about you？What is your plan in this winter holiday？What will you do in thin winter holiday ？
自己写的，可能不好~~

The winter holiday is coming. Iam going to finish doing my homework as soon as possibel so that I can spend some time reviewing my lessons and preparing the new lessons. I am going to visit my grandparents and spend a week with them. I will help my parents do some housework and do the shopping because my parents work hard every day. I will go skiing and skating with my parents,too. I am sure i will have a happy and meaningful winte holiday.