请英语高手帮我翻译成英文，英文问题是参考用的，急用

For this audit, I would like to explain as below：
Are finished goods stored in a controlled area to avoid theft, loss, damage, deterioration?
Cause:：The factory receive a notice that those goods shall be delivery at once, but the finsihed goods warehouse was full at that time, so that stack those goods at the gate of the warehouse for convenient to load. The factory formulated that all finished goods shall be stored in controlled area, Obviously the warehouse gate was not control well, it had risk of been stealed or destroyed. The fatory expected that it was not a big problem, as actually, it was not allowed. I will deepen the train to factory and tell them it is a big problem, to improve their consciousness on protecting finished goods.

2. Are materials stored in a controlled area to avoid theft, loss, damage, deterioration?
Cause:：Before audit, I told the factory many times to put the raw matrial in raw materil warehouse. Actually, they have put almost raw material in warehouse. But two days before the audit, they bought a batch of plastic particle. they thought that the plastic particle will not be damp, so the workers just put them in the passway. I think I did not do well on training for the factory, the materail will be stealed or lost if they are put outside. Even if the plastic particle would not be damp, it might effect the quality more or less. The factory is lack of the awareness on this point, they have fluke mind. I will train again to the fatory administer, to avoid this case happen again.

Does the factory have a documented process to make sure that incoming raw materials, components, and/or sub-assemblies conform to US Safety and Regulatory requirements?
Cause:：I have ever sent this documented process to the factory, but they forgot to print it out, This is my work fault, I feel sorry that I did not check again. I will ask the fatory to print it out and ensure it will be stamped with "controlled documents"

Is there a written procedure that defines how quality records are stored, protected, and disposed of as well as a defined retention period?
Cause:：After checked with this doucment some days ago, I was found there was grandfather cycle problem on the rule of this document. So I asked them to amend, but the cleck just altered the number for saving labour, it is not allowed, the documented process shoud be printed with no write, so the auditor considered the document is invalid. I feel sorry that I did not check again for this document. It is really the fault that should not be happen. I will ask them to revise and print this document, and check again to ensure there is no mistake.

For some problem，as weekly quality goals and actual performance, training program testing record, pre-production meeting, etc. some of these are only not conformance to requirements, or just be lack of one training record, I think it is a little unfair to the factory.
In addition，the Auditor told us that TCPS Shanghai received a report, said the factory did not do audit to produce Children production
I asked the factory, they replied me that they have not produce any children products before, also not in the future. Furthermore, I did not see any trace that they have produced children products on site. Therefore, we have lost many grades.

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你好，我想请问下，Does the factory have a documented process to make sure that incoming raw materials, components, and/or sub-assemblies conform to US Safety and Regulatory requirements? 这个需要做一个什么样的程序文件，你有范文可以给我看下吗？我们刚好做Target的验厂。

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