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Good afternoon everyone! My great honor to be here, I am very glad to share with you my topic. The topic of my speech today is " stay hungry, stay foolish ". This is Steve Jobs, CEO of Apple 's words he said. This is the thisinspiring sentence, guide him through all the ups and downs of life. Why is the genius of the sentence

From my point of view,the motto “Stay hungry, stay foolish” is full of
wisdom. Staying hungry exclusively refers to our curiosity and thirst for
knowledge while staying foolish means our modest attitude towards life. Only by
pursuing knowledge as if we were hungry for food and remaining humble as if we
were foolish can we become more creative and innovative and make great
contributions to society as Jobs did.

As a just to enter the community near the middle school students, this motto, encouraged me greatly advance. Anyway, I have a big success, not the result, eager to learn is the most important. Not the end of study, in this case I must learn not only the curiosity is also withmodesty. Only stay hungry stay foolish, I will learn better, gethigher scores in the future university years, laid a solid foundation, and future success.

No cross, no crown. Although althoughsteve is dead, but he will always be remembered, not only for his greatcontributions to electronic industry and for his company's attitude and success. In short, should have the spirit to him that we students. Forever stayhungry, stay foolish

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求知若饥，虚心若愚
大家下午好！我很荣幸来这里，我很高兴能与你分享我的话题。今天我演讲的题目是“求知若饥，虚心若愚”。这句话中所提到的史蒂夫·乔布斯，
前首席执行官的苹果。它是这样的
鼓舞人心的句子，引导他所有的跌宕起伏的生活。什么
这个天才意味着通过一句？
从我的角度来看，“求知若饥，虚心若愚”充满
智慧。保持饥饿的完全是指我们的好奇和渴望
知识在愚蠢的手段，我们微薄的生活态度。只有通过
追求知识，因为如果我们渴望食物和保持谦逊如果我们
愚蠢的我们可以变得更有创造性和创新，使伟大的
对社会的贡献，为工作做。
作为一个年轻的studentwho将步入社会不久，工作格言有了我很大的鼓励，
让我向前走。无论多么伟大的成就我所取得的成绩，这是
而不是成就但渴望学习，真的很重要。有
没有尽头的学习，在这种情况下，我不仅要学习的好奇心也
谦虚的。只有保持饥饿，保持愚蠢的我会更好地学习和获得
较高的分数在未来的大学岁月，奠定了坚实的基础
你未来的成功。
未经苦难，得不到荣冠。althoughsteve工作去世，他将永远被记住，不仅为他的伟大
对电子工业也为他的公司的生活态度
与成功。总之，我们学生应该承担的座右铭牢记。永远停留
饥饿，保持愚蠢！有英文的说明是错的，你再看看意思有没有不对劲