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hello everyone, this is today's news. yesterday, a girl commited suicide by jumping down a building roof. let's see what happened then. see, the gilr was standing on the top of the building, and she had a miserable expression on her face. there's a police trying to talk her in to coming down away from the dangerouse area but in the end, the girl jumped as the crowd was gathering together to make disturbance.(自己翻译 无搜索)

翻译结果如下：
Hello, everybody, welcome to watch today's news. There was a girl jumping over her life. Let's look at the scene of the situation at that time. See, the girl is standing on the top floor, she looked very sad. Behind her is a policeman trying to persuade her to come down. Downstairs the masses constantly kick up a row, the girl finally jumped down.

good morning，everyone！welcome to watch the news. yesterday, there was a girl ended her life by jumping down a high building. now let's see the scene at that time. look, the girl is standing on the attic， she looked very sad. behind her, it's a policeman who was trying to persuade her coming down. but the onlookers kept hooting. and finally the girl jumped down.