I hope to be with you again, if you still love me.
首先,英语表达都是先说重点,在这句话中,"想和你在一起"是意图应该先说,"你还爱我"只是条件.这刚好跟汉语反过来了.
其次,从意思中说明以前在一起过,所以,应该加上个again才更符合逻辑.
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If you still love me, I hope to be with you forever.
If you still love me,I hope to be with you!
I hope get on well with you , if you still love me.
I hope I am going to be with you, if you love me still.