急求英语达人。。看看我写的这篇自我介绍有没有语法错误。如果没有。能修改的帮我修改一下。拜托了。急用

girl改为girls
see everyone改为 see you all
how i am 改为what I am like （我是什么样的人）
reading books are good ...改为reading books is good ...（虽然books是复数，但主语不是books，而是reading books）
improve打错字了

girl改为girls

Now , let me show you how I am. 最好改成
Now,let me tell you something about myself.

I think reading books are good for my study and it can imporue my Chinese 改为
I think reading is good for study and it can improve my Chinese

I think singing can make me happy 为了上下文贯通最好改成，
And it can make me feel happy. So,this is me.

Hello! Boys and girls. My name is Ye baoyi. I am eleven years old. Now I am studying in Xi Tou primary school. Glad to meet you all and let me to introduce myself(show who i am). Generally speaking, I am a quiet girl. I like singing songs and reading books. Reading books is able to improve my Chinese knowledge and good for my study. As to singing songs, it's my favorite hobby which can make me happier. Do you like me and perfer to become my friends? I hope so.
That's all. Thank you!

第一句girl加s , singing is my favourite hobbygirl改为girls
see everyone改为 see you all
how i am 改为what I am like （我是什么样的人）
reading books are good ...改为reading books is good ...（虽然books是复数，但主语不是books，而是reading books）
improve打错字了

boys and girls

I think reading books are good for my study and it can imporue my Chinese。

中的 imporue 是什么意思，没有这个单词吧！是 imporve 吧！