请帮我看看这篇英文作文有没有错的和需要改进的地方，批改一下，感激不尽。。。。。谢谢了.

In the past,here is a village.--------Jiangyang used to be a village.

With the rapid development.-------缺少主语 别告诉我你是直接翻译的。
But so many problems also come in the train of it.-------一般But，and之类的词不开头，而且 in the train of it是什么东西-.-

The most serrious problems is water pollution.Many chemical factori produces terreble water.------serious拼错了，1个问题不用加"s", factory

.andponr it in the river------ pour

aroundand------SPACE between d&a

Because df these-----of

the water what can drink has----------that

The most fish in the river have gone death.-------Most of the fish in the river died.
However,not all people know water is a very important thing of everyone.-----删了吧 我都懒得改了

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