求英语牛人帮我找出一个简单的句子的语病

I love you not because who you are,but becuase who I am in the face of you.
And I am still myself with my promise and responsibility in my heart！
我爱你，不是因为你是谁，而是因为在你面前我是谁。
我，还是那个承诺和责任都在心中的的我。
or
I love you not because who you are,but becuase who I am in the eyes of you.
我爱你，不是因为你是谁，而是因为在你眼里我是谁。
Just as a saying goes——Beauty is in the eyes of beholder
正如俗语所说“情人眼里出西施”。
祝你开心如意！O(∩_∩)O~~

I love you not because who you are,but becuase who I am in the face of you.
And I am still myself with my promise and responsibility in my heart！
我喜欢你，不是因为你是谁，只是在你面前我是谁。我仍然是我自己，带着我心中的责任和承诺。