首先我们应该描述出来,你很兴奋。
然后再说 你这个一天都要做什么
最后做出一个总结
范文:
My Holiday
Oh! It was winter holiday. I was very happy. I read my
favourite books. I have many wonderful books. But I could not read these books
too much. I also had a lot of homework to do. I like playing computer games,
too. It’s very interesting. But I could not play it too much. I wear glasses,
I’m very sad. It’s not good for my eyes to play computer games too much.
Oh! It was the Spring Festival. It’s Chinese traditional festival. People were
very happy. They went shopping, cleaned their houses, had supper together……I
went to my grandparents’ home with my parents. My grandparents were very happy
to see us. They prepared many kinds of nice food, such as fish, meat, vegetables
and fruit. In the evening, we watched TV and lighted fireworks. We also knocked
on people’s doors and gave some presents to them. After the Spring Festival, we
went to Shanghai to go shopping. We bought clothes, shoes andsome delicious food.
During my holiday, I would like to hang out with my friends. Amusement park, museum and aquarium are the places which we go often. This holiday I went to amusement park. There are some exciting rollercoasters and a big sky wheel. Taking the sky wheel let me see the view of the whole city. After we tired, we found a restaurant to have our dinner. The food which we ordered was delicious. What a wonderful day it is!
My holiday is very good!
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