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My neighbor was a young man who liked to listen to music.The music was very loud even at night and he often gathered together with his friends at home.He influenced my study and normal life. I was so angry that I went to his home, hoping he can turn the sound down.

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Hi, I'm XXX from next door.
你好，我是隔壁的XXX
I see that you like music and partying, and that's perfectly OK,
我发现你很喜欢听音乐和开派对，这挺好的。
But I'm just wondering if you could keep it down a bit, because the noise is really getting on my nerve.
但我只是想请你注意下音量，我快受不了了。
Thank you!
谢谢！

One of my neighbours was a young man, he likes listening to music, even in the evening his music is turned loud and quite often his friends would like to gathther togather in his house. The young man influenced my study and my normal life. In the end I was very angry,then I went to his home and hoped his music could be turned down.
我的楼上朋友------上海。。。。。也写得好

My neighbor is a young man,he likes listening wo music,even he also turns up the voise of the music at night,and often has a party with friends at home.He influenced my study and normal life.So I was very angry.Then I went to his home,hoped (that)he can turns down the voice.

My neighbor is a young man, he's like to listen to music, even at night music will also put a lot and it's often at home and friends. He influenced my study and normal. So, I was very angry. So, I went to his house, hope he can to turn it down

My neighbor is a young man, he likes to listen to music, even at night the voice of the music also big and often have a party with friends at home. He influenced my study and normal. So, I was very angry. Then, I went to his house, hope he can to turn it down.