帮忙翻译一下下面的英文,我想看一下语句是否正确.谢谢

Hello, everyone! I'm on duty today.
大家好,今天我值日了.
I’m 12 years old, and my birthday is on February 16th
我12岁,我的生日是2月16日
I come from Chengdu.There are three People in my family,they are my mother,father and l.
我来自成都,我家有三口人,爸爸,妈妈,和我.
Blue is my favourite colour.
蓝色是我最喜欢的颜色
I most like the season is the winter, because my birthday in winter
我最喜欢的季节是冬季,因为我的生日在冬天.
My favourite fruit is peach.
我最喜欢的水果是桃子.
My favourite animal is the horse, because I like riding a horse
我喜欢的动物是马,因为我喜欢骑马.
when is my birthday?
我的生日是什么时候?
What’s my favourite season?why?
我最喜欢的季节是什么?为什么?
Why do I most like the horse?
我为什么最喜欢马?
What’s my favourite colour?
我喜欢的颜色是什么?

语法上没什么错误,但I most like the season is the winter, because my birthday in winter 这句话有一点点问题,我修改如下:
The season i like best is the winter,because my birthday is in winter.