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I‘m Wang Li,now I'm 18 years old.I want to be a tour guide.I have been learning English in beijing language school for two years.I n my opinion,I must improve my English skills so that I can become a successful tour guide.After China hold the shanghai expo,there is only china venue left.I hope I can show guests around these places,become a good tour guide.

My name is Wang Li, 18 years old. I want to become a tourist guide as my career.
I have studied foreign language, including English, for two years in the Beijing Language School. English is a very important language as most foreigners speak English. If I want to be a successful tourist guide, I must improve my English, both spoken and written.
After the Shanghai Expo held in 2010, the China venue is kept in whole by Shanghai City for tourists visit. I hope I can lead foreign visitors and guests to visit the China venue, and become an excellent tourist guide.