朋友没有邀请你去她的生日聚会,怎样给对方提建议 英语作文

Hey, my dear friend, a happy birthday! this is my carefully selected for your birthday, gave you, but to my birthday to open it well.
Hear that you will be held at the birthday party in place to do? is there anything i can do? i'd like to attend your birthday party, because i took you for the best of friends. we are friends, it should be frank, if i had a bad place would you please tell me, i will be promptly corrected. i hope that our company is very pleasant.
Oh, let me see that there will be any fun game? good stuffs we went for so long, i don't know your birthday party what? my dear friends, can satisfy my curiosity, in a little?

嘿，我亲爱的朋友，生日快乐！这是我为你精心挑选的生日礼物，提前送给你，不过要到生日那天才能打开看哦。
听说你会在生日那天举行生日派对，想好怎么做了么？有什么我可以效劳的么？我好想参加你的生日聚会，因为我把你当成最好的朋友。我们是朋友，那就应该坦诚相对，如果我有做的不好的地方请你告诉我，我会及时改正。我希望我们的相处是十分愉悦的。
啊，让我想想那天会有哪些好玩的游戏呢？好期待哦~
我们相交这么久，我还不知道你心中的生日聚会是什么样子呢？我亲爱的朋友，可以稍微满足一下我的好奇心么？

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