你好，你这样翻译比机器出来的也好不到哪儿去，我帮你试一下：
The Sun rises 365 times in a year,
So often I'd give you my blessings.
The clock turns 1440 rounds in a day,
So often I'd think of you in my heart.
I want you to be happy each and every day,
as much as I want you sound and safe,
May the halo of fortune surround you,
bright as the rising Sun and forever new.
是不是读来更加顺口？
是的
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