我要用英语自我介绍，帮忙翻一下，谢谢！

我自己翻的，你看看，我觉得你是要去做face to face 的自我介绍，所以写得口语化一点。
Hello, everyone.thank you for being here to give me a chance to introduce myself. My name is A, 24 years old. I was graduated from financial college, and I have experienced three years in banking. Though it is so different from the work I want to join in, I thing it is similar cause both of them are serving clients, and I have gained a lot of experiences of communicating with different types of clients which will surly do help to the work now. I have learned how to do the marketing and how to communicate with the clients, and I think I did a pretty good job before. my major is English durying my undergraduate course, that's a reason for me to join in the trade business; and for another reason is many of my friends are all engaged in trade, this will help me to learn fast in my new job. With three years experiences of working, I think I will do better in the new job.

Hello, everyone, I call A, 24 years old this year, I graduate from financial college, there are three years, bank working experience, although hope with now be engaged in of the profession relate to not and greatly, I feel me to still learn to some techniques which be advantageous to outside 贸 to work from the bank, similarly service customer, three years, the bank works I also ran into not a few customers of types, at to product marketing, make a hospitality door relation aspect me to feel the oneself does of can also, because what my undergraduate course read aloud is English professional, so, want to be engaged in a profession to more is also on the other hand to the oscular profession of reason, moreover, I have many friend's classmateses to all be engaged in outside 贸 profession of, plus to be working backlog for bank three years not a few social experience, I believe I can be better and faster than the others of adapt a new work, create a performance for the business enterprise.
给分^-^

Good morning, I called A, 24-year-old, I graduated from financial institutions, banks have three years work experience, and although now that the industry engaged in little, but I feel I was from the bank to learn some skills and foreign trade, the same customers, I work three banks encountered many types of clients in the marketing of products, improve customer relationships, I do feel self can also, as I read the undergraduate English majors, therefore, want to engage in a more professional counterparts in the industry is one of the reasons, I also have many friends students are engaged in foreign trade firms industry, plus three years of work in the bank accumulated a lot of social experience, I believe I can be better and faster than others to adapt to the new work, create benefits for the enterprise.

Hello, everyone, I call ..., 24 years old this year, I graduate from financial college, have three years, bank working experience, although hope with now be engaged in of the profession relate to not and greatly, I feel me still learn from the bank some be advantageous to the technique that the outside Mao work, similarly serve customer, three years, the bank work I also ran into not a few customers of types, is making a hospitality door a relation me to feel that the oneself do to the product marketing of can also, because what my undergraduate course read aloud is English professional, so, the profession which wants to be engaged in a profession more to also on the other hand of reason, moreover, I have many friend's classmates to all be engaged in outside Mao profession of, plus is work backlog for bank three years not a few social experience, I believe that I can be better and faster than others of adapt a new work, create a performance for the business enterprise.

相信我吧！！！

Hello, everyone, I call A, 24 years old this year, I graduate from financial college, there are three years, bank working experience, although hope with now be engaged in of the profession relate to not and greatly, I feel me to still learn to some techniques which be advantageous to outside 贸 to work from the bank, serving customer, three years similarly, the bank works I also ran into not a few customers of types, at to product marketing, make a hospitality door relation aspect me to feel the oneself does of can also, because what my undergraduate course read aloud is English professional, so, want to be engaged in a profession to more is also on the other hand to the oscular profession of reason, moreover, I have many friend's classmateses to all be engaged in outside 贸 profession of, plus to be working backlog for bank three years not a few social experience, I believe I can be better and faster than the others of adapt a new work, create a performance for the business enterprise.

我不是英语高手，只能望分兴叹了！哎~