i arrived at u s 2nd august 2011,planned to visit relatives and go sightseeing for a few days then return to hometown originally,but during the 2 month sightseeing,i have been attracted by the beautiful scenery here,and also have strong interest in american culture and different art style due to i major art design at home,which are propitious to my subject,time flies,2 month time is up,so i have made a decision,stay here and take the advantages to improve my subject,but i know i still have language problems,and can not communicate well with natives during sightseeing,after the 2 month sightseeing ,i decide to join a language school to improve my language ability,so that i can understand well the american history ,humanity and western culture which are different from chinese art and culture,this can not only enrich my experience but also my inner qualities,so i have a strong desire to stay here for study,hope grant me a permission
"I in 2011 August 2, was going to come to the United States to visit your country, and in your days will return to their visit, but, two months to play down, I was deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery of the United States. In China I major in major is art design, but also by the United States different culture, different artistic breath. This I attracted to the professional training very helpful. Time flies, turn to two months soon. So, I made a decision. I'm going to continue to study in the United States. But because of my professional I have obstacle, the language in the process of tourism, deeply understand to can't communicate with the local people in pain. Over two months after the travel, I decided to sign up a language school, to help me in the language fast growth. So I can better thorough, better thorough understanding of the history of the United States, the humanities, and is different from the Chinese art and culture of the western culture. It not only increased my knowledge, also enriched my content. So I really hope to stay in the United States, approved at learning."