求助！！《求职信》译英文，望各位高手指教

Dear Sirs:
Much sorry to trouble you,this is a student from one of Mr.Zhang,I think I will need the satisfied with you in all the field in your company.Respecting to hearing from you as soon as possible,I wish I will have an interview at your convience.(Enclosing my RESUME in the curriculum vitae)
友情提醒:句子的主语不要出现太多的"我",这样的英语不地道.建议你以后写英语作文的时候经常用些主从复合句,会起到很完美的效果.祝你成功.

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Dear Manager :
I'm presumptuous to trouble you , I was a student of teacher Zhang who recommended you to me .After listening to her introduction, i believe i can be qualified for this position you provide for. Therefore ,I ask for the job to you,i hope you can give me the interview opportunity.
Looking forward to your response! (My resume is on the attached curriculum vitae)