英语好的人请看看这句话有没有语法错误？谢谢！^ ^

“the man who you may not remerber always”有语法错误，the man 作先行词， who you may not remerber always 作后置定语，而定语从句中缺少的是remember后的宾语，所以应该用whom引导定语从句，还有always，最好换成 very often；其他地方翻译也不是很好。
Father ,there is always a warm scene remembered in your mind about a man whom you may not recall very often .

Father,the man who you may not remember very often always leaves a certain warm scene of him in your memory.
But在你的句子中应该引导两个简单句，而你的Father, the man who you may not remerber always,就是but之前的部分不是一个句子，去掉father之后的逗号改为is。漏译了温暖、某个。

Father is the man who you may not remerber always, but he can always leave a warm moment in your memory.

你翻译的句子逻辑主语不一致，是错的。这样改逻辑主语就都是Father 了

如果是语法的话，看不出有哪里出差错。不过翻译起来总有些不对，也说不上来

有错误