送分啦～！！英语问题

Anwely is one of my best friend.We know each other through internet.Although we have never met,we have a strong frendship.She does be a very cute person in my opinion.she is twelve years old,born on May 15th in 1995.Winter is her favorite season and she is fond of the color of pale blue,pink,golden brown......What's more,we have many things in common:both of us like surfering the net,reading novels,and listen to SHE's songs.Nevertheless she rarely goes on the internet,she is still my good frend.Finally,I wish our frendship is able to stand the test of ages and be permanent.

My best friend is ANWELY, we are through the network understanding, although has not met, our friendship is extremely deep.In my opinion, she is an extremely lovely person.She was born in May 15, 1995, 12 years old, most like this year the winter, most liked the pale blue. Pink. Golden yellow ......But we have many same places, for instance all likes accessing the net, all likes reading the novel, all likes listening to SHE's song.Now she hasn't accessed the net any longer, but she still was my good friend, hoped our friendship can be able to stand up to the years test, can for ever and ever ~!!

(个人翻译，非机器)My best friend is Anwely, we met each other through internet. Although we never met each other before, our friendship is still very strong. In my oppinion, she is a very lovely person. She was born on May the 15th 1990, and she is 12 years old now. She loves winter. Her favourite is light blue, pink, and golden. Also we have many similar interests such as chatting online, reading novels and listenning to the songs from S.H.E. She doesn't get online that often now but still she is my best friend. I hope our friendship can remain and last forever.

支持你们的感情。朦胧情感是很美的，留住这份心中的美丽！

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