英语高手进!请英语高手帮忙修改下语法及其他的错误。急用,在线等!谢谢了。有肉!答的好给加肉,谢谢!

2025-01-05 06:43:15
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回答1:

一题一题来啊...
问题还真多...没了主语,语法错了 然後句子本身也很verbose 语境也错了等等...
1:I got up early; after getting up I was very sleepy. I was sleepy in class even its long I arrived at the classroom, I wanted to sleep as if I was in the dormitory, a comfortable sleep. Sleeping in classroom with arise problems such as myopia in short period of time, and because I can't have breakfast in classroom to keep us alert, it would be harmful in the long run.

2:There are only 7 buses can be taken from downtown to our school. Our school is situated at the suburb, and it would be too expensive to take the taxi. So buses became the only choice; however it's every crowded, and people jostled around all the time. I am not supposed to have car sick but now I feel a little bit dizzy.