请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“最近在我上发生了很多事情，很多我付出了很多心血和努。。。”

错误太多了哦

actually换成recently，后面的recently删掉

there后面加have been

happen on换成happen to

下一句中的a lot of 冗余去掉

worked very hard on it把那个it删掉

a good result换成good results

This makes me not only sad but also despair.
改成This makes very disappointed even a little bit despair

touching换成touched，hear换成heard

I try to believe
改成I'd like to believe

hope后面改成that day could come sooner

最后一句改成same here，I wish everything‘s going on fine with you too

Recently，much business has visited me. Sufficient effort and energy as I paid, the desirable result, ultimately, didn't wave to me,which disppointed me and even desperated.So,I'm moved by your story.Everything ，I believe ，will restore immediately and hope your life smooth.
希望采纳！

Actually, there's something happened to me recently. A lot of staffs I worked very hard on turned to have a bad result. This makes me sad or evenb despair. That's why I was so touching when I heared your story. I believe that everything will be fine.But I really hope that day comes sooner. Also, wish you everything OK.