when引导的事 非限定性定语从句, 修饰era。 解释为 。。。。样的经济全球化的时代
我觉得句首用NOWADAYS比较好吧
然后,我觉得这个句子可能是因果关系,从句用SO来引导,你觉得行不行呢?
At present we are on the threshold of an era of economic globalization so that it’s hard to overstate the significance of innovation .
前面是因,后面是果,用so that 好些吧~~
i think that is ok, or perhaps we can use the word "while".目前我们处于一个无论怎样重[视创新都不为过的经济全球化时代的开端。用while seems like being better.