英语高手来~~(在线等，速度，有悬赏）

Dear xx___,
my birthday is coming and i am really glad to invite you to my birthday party. it will be held at my home and my mum is going to make a big meal. so don't miss it! i am looking forward to knowing your reply.
best wishes.
Yours
______

dear friend:
my brithday is come. i rise a little party in ren ming guang chang. there a millims of people enjoy my party. i really want to tell everyone!!! i take advantage wile my girlfriend hang me out to dry. i cant see her every week! i lost my self again!