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In this short essay I would like to analyse why people hold difference opinions and express my own ideas.

Young people are always enthusiastic and passionate. Therefore, when they fall in love, they can perform many romantic things to show how much they love their sweetheart. In addition,most of them are students who haven't any work experience, so they might look at the world fill with harmonious and imagination. At this time, in their opinion, love is the only condition for marriage.
As people grow up, they enter the sociaty, and experience life themselves. They might figure out out that life is really hard while they should try their best to earn money to support their families in spite of working-related stress. Now they have no times to perform the romantic things because they are busy working, job hunting, buying apartment and bringing up the children and so on.Many of the things make them exhausted entirely. Romantic is so abstract which is useless when they get in a hard situation.All they want is a responsible spouse who would take care of them when they feel tired.

In my view, if you want a successful marriage,to find a responsible spouse is more important than a romantic one.For example, if you get sick,a responsible spouse would look after you carefully while a spouse full of imagination would only bring you a useless rose.Year after year, you would find that the fact is cruel and a steady marriage also means to support each other and be responsible rather than only talk about love.