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     As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because∧the
    1. It                                                         2. crowd                                                            3. of
financial crisis, the situation of the employment has become very serious. Consider this, some people suggest
                                                                                                     4. Considering
graduates should have a lower career expectation, such as working in the western area of China. I∧in favor
                                                                                                                                         5. am
of this idea. Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competition is not as fierce there, but graduates can easy
                                                                                                                           6. so                 7. easily
get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all, going to the west maybe 
                                                                   8. graduates
bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is both good for our personal development and for our
9. brings                                                                                       10. your
country at present.