可以把一些简单的句子,变成从句这样子更能加分哦!例如:每年,都有很多大学生毕业,他们都想找到工作。这些工作可以给他们很多钱。这是不可能的。①Every year, many college students graduate. ②They all want to find jobs. ③These jobs can give them a lot of money.④This is impossible.
下面润色一下:It is impossible for college students who have just graduated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money.
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