寻求帮助，需要一份英语的自我介绍。希望完善一下，急急急急急急

hello, I am **, 24 years old. It's very nice to meet eateemed you all. I found my first job in real estate industry fter 4 years of study in architecture in *** university. When I was still a kid, I had a powerful aspiration of soaring in the blue sky, then I made a big dream and decided struggle for it. Although for various reasons, my dream is still unrealized, I never give it up.
I am a boy with optimistics, open-minded characteristics, who are progressive, endurable and a good teamworker.
I used to get good score in English learning when I was in high school, but now my English is not so good because I had little chance to use it in university. Please believe me I will try my best to learn it well if it is necessary.
I have wide hobbies such as music, sports, especially, I am a good saucer player.
Very appreciated to be given this cherish opportunity to introduce myself to you. Thanks a lot!

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Hello,everyone
It is my honor to see you all here. I am 24 years old,graduated from Construction Engineering.My work is real estate.I had a desire to fly from childhood for longing for the blue sky.However,i didn't realize it for many reasons.But i had never give up my dream.I am a person of optimistic, and positive in work.Admit defeat, and tenacity, good team spirit.
My english is good when i was a senior school student,when i was at university,my major is not english thai i didn't spend much time learning it.However,I believe i can learn it well if it is necessary for my work.
My hobby is very wide,I love PE, good at football and singing.And has achieved numbers awards.
It is really my honor to have this oppourity to introduce myself to you ,thank you .