英语翻译

麻烦楼主审阅、鉴别。谢谢

“我试用了你们的样品，这种型号的产品可以满足我们的需要。通过检测证明你们的产品，各项技术参数都达到我们的标准。
I have had trial use of your samples; this type of products can meet our demands. After inspection and testing of your products it is confirmed that all the technical parameters are in accordance with our standards.
我们希望你们的产品能从以下几个方面做出改进：
We hope your products are further improved from the following aspects:
1. 能够满足建筑美学的要求
1 Being able to meet the requirement of Architectural Aesthetics
2. 能够满足建筑物的采光要求
2 Being able to meet the requirement of building lighting
3. 能够满足建筑的安全性能要求
3 Being able to meet the requirement of building security performance
4. 能够满足安装方便的要求
4 Being able to meet the requirement of easy installation
5. 能够具有寿命长的优势
5 Being able to have the advantage of long life”

I have tried out your samples, which can meet our requirements and are proofed to live up to our criteria through testing. However, it would be better if the products would have been improved as follows:

1. in terms of architectural aesthetics;
2. in terms of lighting requirements of a building;
3. in terms of safety performance of a building;
4. in terms of convenience to installation;
5. to have a longer life.

I have tried out the samples you sent to me, and found this type of product will satisfy our demands. We also found that all the parameter of techniques is up to our standard.
In addition, we hope you can make some advance in these aspects as follows.

1. To meet the requirements of architectural aesthetics
2. To meet the requirements of buildings' daylight factor
3. To meet the requirements of safety
4. To make installation easy
5. To have the advantage in achieving a long life of products

Can satisfy the construction esthetics the request
Can satisfy building's natural lighting to request
Can satisfy the easy installation request
Can satisfy the construction the safety performance request

Can have the life long superiority”

怎么回答都不一样啊，，你用谷歌在线翻译就可以了啊

After trying your sample,we found that this kind of product can meet our needs and all the technical parameters of the product can reach our requirements after some tests.But we hope that you can make some improvements from the aspects below:
1. To meet the requirements of architectural aesthetics
2. To meet the building's lighting requirements
3. To meet the performance requirement for architectural safety
4. To meet the requirements of easy installation
5. To have the advantage of long life "