Nowadays more and more students turn a cold back to spelling .(于是无不太懂“turn a cold back”是啥意思..)
And such a phenomenon almost sweeps every university .
Now[,] let me explain [some] factors of this phenomenon and offer my view on it.
First, the goal of most students to learn English is to [use it as a communication tool by speaking] or just to pass the test(注意单复数,还有最好写清楚什么test,或者直接用exams/model exams), of which multiple choices take up the major proportion [of the English testpapers].
Besides , the wide use of electronic devices such [as] e-dictionaries and computers(额咋觉得这俩是一样物质呢..乃可以用"use e-dictionary to look for words"和"put right spelling mistakes in computers"这样的说法来区别) may be another important [cause].
By using those tools,students [are] no longer [required to] correct the [words spelling] by themselves.
As a result [of them,这个改动乃可以不采纳,只是觉得读起来有点拗口..], spelling seems not that important [in today's education].
As far as I am[have,乃用的是被动..]concerned, [I believe] we [shouldn't,“cannot”感觉语气太强烈] emphasize the importance of spelling [so] much. [Due attention should be given to spelling immediately because writing [is still] a way to communicate all the time.]
[Also,] not spelling correctly means we can not get our ideas cross to others freely.
如今,越来越多的学生把感冒回到拼写错误。
这种现象,几乎每个大学扫。吧,
我解释了这一现象,提供的因素是我的看法。
首先,大多数学生的目的是学英语讲它或只是为了通过考试,其中多项选择题的比例。除此之外,广泛使用的电子设备e-dictionaries和电脑可能是另一个重要的因素是符合使用这些工具,学生们不再需要正确的单词。作为一个结果,拼写似乎并不那么重要。
就我而言,我们不能强调的重点,因为拼写太多写作可以是一种交流方式,而不是拼写正确意味着我们不能得到我们的想法给别人自由的十字架,所以,应注意拼写。
改好的如下:
Nowadays more and more students are turning a cold back to spelling .
And such a phenomenon almost sweeps in every university . Now let
me explain the factors of this phenomenon and offer my view on it.
First, the goal of most students learning English is to speak it or just to pass the test , of which multiple choices take up the major proportion . Besides , the wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computers may be another important factor .By using those tools ,students no longer need to correct the words by themselves . As a result ,spelling seems not that important .
As far as I am concerned , we can't emphasize the importance of spelling too much .Because writing can be a way to communicate all the time ,and not spelling correctly means we can not get our ideas cross to others freely .So, due attention should be given to spelling immediately.
Now, more and more students back to the cold spell.
And this phenomenon almost swept all the universities. Now, let us
I explained the factors of this phenomenon, it provides me.
First of all, most of the students goal is to speak English, or just to pass the test, including a variety of choices and take a major proportion. In addition, this electronic dictionary, computer widely used electronic equipment may be another important factor. Use these tools, students no longer need to correct their own words. Therefore, the spelling does not seem so important.
As far as I know, we can t stress too much the importance of spelling. Can be written as a way to communicate, rather than spelled correctly means that we can not allow our ideas to other people's freedom. Therefore, due attention should be given immediately spelling.