英语翻译 有关毕业的

好老师啊，我毕业的时候怎么没有老师也给我这么点评呢，呵呵
You are diligent and clever, as well as careless sometimes. Wish you can be competely careful in the future exams. May you be happy, healthy!
英语习惯和汉语不完全一样，比如你是……孩子，英语中不用这么繁琐翻译成you are a ……child，你也是一个粗心的孩子翻译类似。
希望使用wish，祝你……使用may。例如祝你成功，翻译成 May you succeed，succeed是动词
happy与healthy都是形容词，前面加be

You're a diligent, intelligent and lively child, at the same time, you are a careless student. Hope that you could be full careful in every exam in the future. Wish you would be happy and healthy growth.