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With the rapid development of e-commerce in recent years, there is an enormous potential business prospects, but because of the virtual network of participants in the credit and openness, and the uncertainty caused by the credit crisis has become one of the bottlenecks that hinder its development. As the socialist market economy, the credit system has been initially established, but there have been indifferent credit awareness and credit laws and regulations are incomplete, the development of intermediary organizations lag, lack of credit education and research issues. These problems is focus on the performance of the economy occurred many of the credit deficiency phenomenon in some areas of China , which has bafflement the development of country's economic . Therefore, the study of Chinese e-commerce in the credit system is a major issue in Business Management which with practical significance
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This practice on the basis of the concept of e-commerce and e-credit system in the integrity of the mechanism and structure analysis of its theoretical roots. Based on the credit status of our analysis of e-commerce, e-credit system of foreign countries operating the successful experience of building required for the development of Chinese e-commerce e-commerce credit system in China. E-credit system on the internal environment and external ring are described. The construction of credit system in the internal environment must be by the government, industry, business, consumers and the media all together. External environment to ethics as a support for the protection of the law, using the scientific organization and management system and advanced technical means to achieve.

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The rapid development of e-commerce in recent years, an enormous potential business prospects, but because of the virtual network of participants in the credit and openness, and the uncertainty caused by the credit crisis has become one of the bottlenecks that hinder its development. As the socialist market economy, the credit system has been initially established, but there have been indifferent credit awareness and credit laws and regulations are incomplete, the development of intermediary organizations lag, lack of credit education and research issues. These problems is to focus on the performance of the economy in China occurred in the area many of the credit deficiency phenomenon, which has the country's economic development. Therefore, the study of Chinese e-commerce in the credit system into a Business Management major issues with practical significance.
This practice on the basis of the concept of e-commerce and e-credit system in the integrity of the mechanism and structure analysis of its theoretical roots. Based on the credit status of our analysis of e-commerce, e-credit system of foreign countries operating the successful experience of building required for the development of Chinese e-commerce e-commerce credit system in China. E-credit system on the internal environment and external ring are described. The construction of credit system in the internal environment must be by the government, industry, business, consumers and the media all together. External environment to ethics as a support for the protection of the law, using the scientific organization and management system and advanced technical means to achieve.
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E-commerce is developing rapidly in recent years, creating an enormous potential business prospect. However ,because of the virtuality and openness of network, the credit crisis caused by the uncertainty of participants' credit has become the one of the bottlenecks that block its development. With the development of socialist market economy, credit system has been initially established. but some problems have also appeared ,for example, the awareness of credit is weak, laws and regulations on credit are not complete,the develpement of intermediary organizations can't keep up with the pace, credit education and research are lacked,and so on. A reflection of these problems is many credit deficiency phenomenon accurring in economic areas in our country, blocking the development of the national economy. Therefore, discussing the construction of credit system in e-commerce in China becomes an important subject which has practical significance in business management research.
This article analyses the concept of e-commerce credit system ,the credit mechanism and structure issues based on practice, explore its theoretical sources. By analysesing the current situation of e-commerce credit and absorbing successful foreign experience in operating e-commerce credit system, this artical builds an credit system suitable for the development of it in China ,and makes a state
ment about the internal and external environment of e-commerce credit system construction. Internal environment of Credit system construction should be built by the cooperation from the government, industry, companies and consumers and media. External environment is supported with ethics, guaranteed by law, and achieved by applying scientific management system and advanced technical means.

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The rapid development of e-commerce in recent years, an enormous potential business prospects, but because of the virtual network of participants in the credit and openness, and the uncertainty caused by the credit crisis has become one of the bottlenecks that hinder its development. As the socialist market economy, the credit system has been initially established, but there have been indifferent credit awareness and credit laws and regulations are incomplete, the development of intermediary organizations lag, lack of credit education and research issues. These problems is to focus on the performance of the economy in China occurred in the area many of the credit deficiency phenomenon, which has the country's economic development. Therefore, the study of Chinese e-commerce in the credit system into a Business Management major issues with practical significance. This practice on the basis of the concept of e-commerce and e-credit system in the integrity of the mechanism and structure analysis of its theoretical roots. Based on the credit status of our analysis of e-commerce, e-credit system of foreign countries operating the successful experience of building required for the development of Chinese e-commerce e-commerce credit system in China. E-credit system on the internal environment and external ring are described. The construction of credit system in the internal environment must be by the government, industry, business, consumers and the media all together. External environment to ethics as a support for the protection of the law, using the scientific organization and management system and advanced technical means to achieve.

我建议你用google翻译一下，然后再改改语法。