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I know you are Jie Ma. I am a girl. I live in a small town in China, called Plum Village. Wuxi New District Experimental Primary School I was a student, my school very very pretty, I like it very much. I am 12 years old, sixth grade. I grew up with a pair of black eyes and a black hair. My birthday in November. My home has three, namely, father, mother and me. My favorite color is blue, but also like purple. I like playing the piano, listening to music, Internet ...... my favorite animals are dogs and rabbits, because I think they are very cute. Our school in many disciplines, mathematics, language, English, music, sports, art, science, society and computers. I do not like the language, so composition is not very good. Wuxi good weather, spring, here are warm, green trees, and flowers opened, and we often go kite flying. The weather is very hot in summer, so we do not like to go outside. Autumn is the best season, when very cool, we like to picnic. Although the winter cold, but we really like to go outside to make a snowman. We had to start classes on Christmas and Halloween activities.

I hope to hear from you soon. Goodbye.
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I know you are Jima. I am a girl too.I live in a town in China. And it called village Mei. I am a student in lab primary school in WuXi. My school is very big and beautiful. I like it very much.I am 12 years old. I have black eyes and black hair. I was born in November.There are three people in my family.My father my mother and I.My favorite color is blue but purple is right too.I like playing piano,listening music surfacing the Internet...My favorite animals are dogs and rabbits because I think they are very cuit. I have many lessons such as math chinese english music P.E art science socioligy and computer.But I don't like chinese.So I am not at writing.WuXi's weather is very good.In spring ,there is so warm.The trees turn green.The flower is bloom.We often fly the kite.In summer is very hot so we don't like going outside.Autume is a fine season because it's very cool.We like hiking so much.In winter,it's very coldbut we also like making snowman.Our class had a activity about Chirstmas and Hellowmas.
I am looking forward to your letter soon.Byb
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I know you are Jie Ma. I am a girl. I live in a small town in China, called Plum Village. Wuxi New District Experimental Primary School I was a student, my school very very pretty, I like it very much. I am 12 years old, sixth grade. I grew up with a pair of black eyes and a black hair. My birthday in November. My home has three, namely, father, mother and me. My favorite color is blue, but also like purple. I like playing the piano, listening to music, Internet ...... my favorite animals are dogs and rabbits, because I think they are very cute. Our school in many disciplines, mathematics, language, English, music, sports, art, science, society and computers. I do not like the language, so composition is not good. Wuxi weather is good, spring here is very warm, green trees, and flowers have opened, and we often go kite flying. The weather is very hot in summer, so we do not like to go outside. Autumn is the best season, when very cool, we like to picnic. Although the winter cold, but we still love to go outside to make a snowman. We had to start classes on Christmas and Halloween activities.

I hope to hear from you soon. Goodbye.