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Chang-ling, no matter what happens, you will always be my wife and I will always love you. Although I am always tired with my life, I will always remember you, not least when I am down. I have the will to undergo anything with you accompanying me.

常玲，不管发生什么事，您还是我的妻子，而我会全心全意地爱您。虽然有时候我会因为工作而疲惫，但是我每时每刻都在挂念您，特别是在我心情低落的时候。只要有你陪伴，我做什么事受什么苦都有勇气坚持下去。

"I will always love you"你将来会一直爱她,那现在呢?
"I work really tired, but I will remember you when tired"不懂你要表达什么意思."我工作一直很累,但是我以后会在累时想起你"?
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不想再往下看了...语法错误,句法错误太多..读都读不通....