070809上海高考英语作文题目

2007年上海高考英语卷作文题：

以礼物为题,写两点:

1：写出赠送礼物的对象以及赠送的礼物

2：所赠送的礼物对他会有什么影响，会给他带来什么变化
关于如何写影响,我们在课堂上的分析型议论文有过全面的讲述.

这次的不同在于出题方式.上海市一向喜欢开发新颖的出题方式.这次的题目中由同学们自己选择赠送的礼物，就构成了半开放的题目，同时进一步增加了题目的迷惑性.

假设我们把题目中的第一点回答掉，那么题目就变成是这样:
"你的同学Tom就要毕业了,你送给他一只手表,请你说说你所赠送的礼物对他会有什么影响，会给他带来什么变化"

大家看,这就是典型的分析型议论文.不过强行规定送什么，就显得题目呆板，所以出题者就把这个问题让考生来回答.

写法很简单,就按照分析型议论文的路子来打提纲:

这篇文章完全可以根据10句作文法写出来：

第一段引出“礼物”这个主题，并写出自己的中心句，即所送礼物为何，给了谁。比如在范文中: It is universally acknowledged that a good present is of great value to a person and even prone to change his or her life. As for me, one of the most impressive presents I have given to my friends is a watch which I had used for more than three years.此2句即为“引言段”，引出了礼物这个主题，并指出我的礼物是一个手表，对象是我的一个朋友。

接下来的主体段落可以根据两个argument，两个detail的方式来写。
先是过度句“：The watch was given to Tom, who is one of my best friends.

第一个argument: 他很粗心，经常迟到这个现实。
detail1:这个礼物可以提醒他注意时间
detail2:关注时间可以使他赢得更多信任以及工作和学习中的高效率

第二个argument:今后他有可能在新环境中感到孤独
detail3：这个手表可以让他想起我们一起走过的日子
detail4：这个手表可以使他在想我们的时候感到好过一些
conclusion：希望他可以喜欢这个礼物，也希望这个礼物能给他带来好运和美好前程

注意：十句作文法大家学了之后一定要把握其精髓，其精髓并不在于严格的10句话，比如两个detail可以合并为一句话，可以用一个长句把两层意思一并表达，比如：he used to tell me that he might feel lonely in the new environment after leaving the old friends in high school, and thus I hope that such a gift will remind him of the good old days we happily spent together and help him to feel better when he misses me.这样一句话就把第二个arfument以及两个detail全部表达了。

范文： It is universally acknowledged that a good present is of great value to a person and even prone to change his or her life. As for me, one of the most impressive presents I have given to my friends is a watch which I had used for more than three years.

The watch was given to Tom, who is one of my best friends. Diligent and warm-hearted as he is, he sometimes has no sense of time, which causes him to be late for many things and leads to some trouble in work. By giving him such a watch, I hope he will pay more attention to punctuality, which will bring him more credibility in life and higher efficiency in both work and study. Besides, he used to tell me that he might feel lonely in the new environment after leaving the old friends in high school, and thus I hope that such a gift will remind him of the good old days we happily spent together and help him to feel better when he misses me.
Anyway, I do wish that Tom will like this present, which hopefully will bring him good luck and motivates him to fight for a better future.

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