这篇作文是我写的,如果有不好的地方,请指教:内容是昨天晚上,我们去参加小明(化名)的生日会,我们大家给他带去许多食物,饮料和水果。还送他礼物。我们唱歌,跳舞,还玩了各种游戏。我们玩得很开心。直到晚上九点钟才回家!
正文:
What
i
did
last
night
?
Last
night.I
went
to
Xiao
ming's
birthday
party
with
some
of
my
friends.
We
took
a
lot
of
food,
drinks
and
fruits
to
him
.Everyone
also
give
a
card
.
We
made
the
cards
by
hand
.At
the
party,
we
sang,
danced
and
played
many
games
.We
didn't
come
back
home
until
9:00
in
the
evening.We
were
all
tired
,but
we
had
a
good
time
!
当然,能采纳更好咯~~谢谢!!