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1.The Characteristic(s) of America Education

Be sensitive with complimentary and critical remarks.
Do not compare one child to another.
Do not compare students with each other.

◎Think a lot of benefit practice and but make light of reputation
(我不是很理解你这句话的内容.)
Emphasize more on cooperative learning and make light of elitism.
Encourage cooperative learning and discourage elitism.

2. My view of American education ,summarizing in three sentences.

◎NO CHILD LEFT BEHIND

◎The Wind Of Freedom Blows

◎Made In China
Be sensitive with complimentary and critical remarks.

◎我不同意你说的关于美国教师不在公开场合表扬学生的观点.相反他们公开大力表扬学生,但是他们表扬时,是表扬什么行为,而不是空洞地说某个学生好,听话. 我可不可以给出我的意见?( Can I say a few words?)
American teachers always believe in positive teaching. Whenever they make compliments, they emphase on specific good behaviors. For example, the teachers would say,” I like the way Johnny sits.” Or “ I am so proud of Mary. She cleans up her toys today.” “Compliment on David for using the magic words with his classmates.” Remarks like these are clear and fair so that other children know very well what the teachers expect them to do. When the teachers make critical remarks, again it is the undesirable behaviors that should be addressed. “ I am so disappointed that Johnny didn’t do his homework. “ David, it is very rude to do that. Do you want others treat you the same way you treat them?” Remarks like these are avoided,” Linda is good . David is bad . The teachers don’t purposely set up role models or elites. All students are considered excellent as long as they do what they are told.
◎Do not to compare to others student
Do not one child to another.
The American teachers think that there are many ways to weigh things so they never compare one student to another. Because they think each individual is unique. They respect the differences of each student. They believe everybody can learn, just not on the same day, or the same way. They organize instructions so that all students are given the opportunity to learn what is being taught. Of course, American students would never go through this “nerve breakdown and heartbeats pounding when reading everybody’s grades on a bulletin board.因此，美国学生没有体会过看成绩排名时心中乱跳的感觉(不会翻><)。

◎Encourage cooperative learning and discourage elitism.

In American schools students learn about group cooperation or teamwork. Everybody can make contributions to a group project. When children take part in a contest, they care more about the process rather than the rankings. They are taught to feel good about themselves. Some children are talented in art. Some children are talented in math. So everybody is special in a certain way.

有些错误,我帮你修改了.以下是修改后的内容.因为不知道你想表达的具体意思是什么,就没有做太大的改动

下面是PPT内容:

1.The Characteristic of America Education

◎Be cautious when commended or criticized

◎Do not to compare with other students

◎Think about a lot of beneficial practice and make light of reputation

2.Have a restricted view of American education in three sentences in America

◎NO CHILD LEFT BEHIND

◎The Wind Of Freedom Blows

◎Made In China

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◎Be cautious when commended or criticized

The teachers in America are seldom commend a student in public places. On one hand,they think that it is implied that the other students are worse than the one who is commended, it would make him be self-complacent and high-headed. On the other hand,it would make the student overweight the reputation and simply please the teacher instead of exert his potential. It would mislead the students. And once he can't get the teachers' commendation,he will be frustrated . But the teachers are also feel troubled with criticize a student. They are very cautious to choose words. They don't want the student to refuse the criticism mentally because the wrong way of criticizing.

◎Do not to compare with other students

The American think that there are many ways to weigh things so they never protest about comparing one student to the others. Because they think every student is an independent one,they have their respective strongpoints and shortcomings. So they instruct students according to their own characteristic,they help the students to understand themselves.因此，美国学生没有体会过看成绩排名时心中乱跳的感觉(不会翻><)。

◎Think a lot of benefit practice and but make light of reputation

In American school there are many competitions to imporve the students' ability. What make the students exciting is the prize not the place in that competition. The students get what they want through their self-strive,they think this is absolutely necessary living skill in modern society.

The Characteristic of America Education （Characteristics用复数）

Do not to compare to others student （Do not compare with other students）

Think a lot about benefited practice but make light of reputation （去掉and）
three sentences

The teachers in America seldom commend a student in public places.

it would make him self-complacent and high-headed

But the teachers are also feel troubled WHEN criticize a student.

They are very cautious ABOUT words they speek

They are afraid that the student would not accept the criticize full-heartly

because of the wrong way of criticizing.

Americans think that there are many ways to weigh things so they

never take an interest in comparing one student to the other.

Because they think every student is an independent individual,they

have their strongpoints and shortcomings respectively. So they

instruct students according to their own characteristics,they help

the students to understand themselves.

因此，美国学生没有体会过看成绩排名时心中乱跳的感觉(不会翻><)。
So American students never suffer the feeling of nervous heart beating
when looking at a rank list of exam.

In American schools there are many ways of competition to imporve the students' ability.

What make the student exciting is the prize not the place in that competition. (这句话有点矛盾 prize是不是practice)

The students get what they want through their endeavor,they think it is the absolute necessary living skills in current society.

我的只是一些肤浅的字面修改，发言稿应该通俗清晰，所以还有些语义还需要整改