关于英语作文的问题

Dear Sir,

My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Windter Asia Games.

I am so excited to know that the Games will be held at the place that I am living. I think it is a once in a life time opportunities for me.

I am 18, male, a final year student of xxx High School. My interest in study is English. I am the secretary of the English Club in our school. I also enjoy sport activities. I take part in our school athletic meet every year. I am a very friendly, helpful and polite person and I am very familiar with the local conditions.
I promise to offer my best service if I am selected. I have attached with this letter, a recommendation from my teacher, for your considerations. I am also prepared to sit for an interview at a time to your convenience.
Hope to hear a favorable reply from you soon.

Thank you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

1.李老师年近50,1975年来校任教,工作一贯很努力,曾多次受到表扬.
Teacher
lee
was
almost
50,
since
1975
when
she
started
to
teach
in
our
school,
she
has
been
hardworking,
and
has
accepted
several
praises.
2.她知识丰富,教学有方,上课生动有趣,深受学生欢迎.
she
has
rich
knowledge,
effective
teaching
technique,
and
lively
way
of
teaching.
3.她与学生关系融洽,但对学生要求严格.
Though
she
blends
well
with
the
students,
but
she
was
strict
with
the
requirements
of
the
students.
4.她是学生的良师益友,深受大家的尊敬和爱戴.
she
was
not
only
a
good
teacher
but
also
a
good
friend
for
the
students.
these
characteristics
earned
her
respect
and
popularity.